"Some People prefer to getting married, while others prefer to stay single until death."
Discuss the advantages of each choice, then explain which one you will choose!
As a human life, people will need each other. Staying alone for a long life is almost impossible. In fact, everyday of course people will meet another to have some daily activities. For personally, because lifa is choice, some people prefer to have a relationship goals by getting married, while others prefer to stay single until old. These choices of life will have special advantages.
For someone who choice to get married someday, they will have more comfortable life. Because they will spend daily life with their couple. So they can sharing everything such as a daily activities, and solve many problems together. It says that life will be more colorful because they are not alone. Then, with getting married, they will create a family by having children. For some people who loved to take care of something or someone, and become a parent, married is the best choice. The last is, when people get married, their life will never get bored. When they feel stressed of working activities, they can grow a good mood and feel fresh again when they at home and meet someone they love there.
Besides getting married, there are people prefer to stay single for a long life, this choice also have benefits. By staying single they think they can do everything as they want and noone can prohibit them. They can also manage their own money spending. The enjoyable thing is they free to go everywhere and meet everyone. It is simple life when people life alone, with their own and personal home, also personal property like car, studio and others. Then, they will usually do everything alone, and become an independent one. They can express and love their self more than others. The last benefit is they will not have a responsibility to take care of the other people, such as children or couple.
To conclude, both of these choices have its own benefits. In my opinion, I prefer to getting married after I feel bored staying single. I mean, of course I will marry soon, after I think I finished with my goals and what I do when Iam single. It just because I believe that we need to stay and live with someone else. So, I want to live with someone whom I love, and have a lovely family someday.
Tricks to write essay fot TOEFL IBT :
- First, understand the theme and what's the command.
- Second, You need to make the flow, it's about the paragraph and the point of each paragraph.
- Mostly like the example above, The flow is like this : "Then you need write atleast 4 paragraph with outline : "
Paragraph 1 : Introduction
Paragraph 2 : Body 1 : The advantages of "Getting merried"
Paragraph 3 : Body 2 : The advantages of " Staying single"
Paragraph 4 : Conclusion : Give your truly opinion.
- Mostly we used simple present tenses, because the sentences will become a fact and commonly understand by people nowdays.
- The time for writing essay in TOEFL IBT is about 25 minutes, so think fast and write it. Make it simple and easy to understand, don't write a difficult word, and avoid the vocabulary that we don't sure about the meaning.
